Writing 3 - By Ali Momeni

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A problem that sometimes can turn to disaster is generation gap.but always there is a question that why generation gap is yielding and which factors cause generation gap. I want to mention some points in this field.

First of all, there is a important question that which groups have a destructive role in this case, parents or teenagers? Experts believe that teenagers have argumenta spirit that it is so hard to prove them that theirs works are mistake, and also experts believe that parents want their children to continue theirs methods of life and follow them in every cases. I think parents must behave theirs children in attend to theirs children age. We can see this claim in our religion, as imam Ali said that behave your children as properties of theirs age.

At the end , I want to mention to this point that both group must respect to beliefs of each others and learn their duty in every cases.

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	این نظر توسط amir nazem در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 18:54 دقیقه ارسال شده است

			in my idea you mentiond the topic very good but you dont use enough examples for fixity the topic.good luck.

	این نظر توسط Sina Rahmani در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 12:11 دقیقه ارسال شده است

			hi ali , your writing was good , but it has some problems: using of "generation gap " phrase many times at the starting lines. line 1 - an important using of "theirs" instead of "their" or other words many times (grammatical error( line 9 - did you mean " argument " ?("a" at the end of the word is wrong( at the end , your main idea was very good and i enjoyed it good luck

	این نظر توسط Sina hassanpour در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 23:51 دقیقه ارسال شده است

			Hi It was such a great writing but you have so many gramatical problems: 1-a important==>an important 2-when there is a name after their ,you don't have to use "s" you use it when there is no name after theeir or our like this ball is ours .not this is ours ball! Good luck!