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Ehsan بازدید : 75 چهارشنبه 03 خرداد 1391 نظرات (2)

Smoking and smokers have become one of the chief problems of every society. Among all the issues which they cause, an appropriate place appertaining to smoking has been one of the first priorities in the agenda of different governments all around the world. In this case, select countries decided to forbid smoking in public places, in others, cigarette marketing has become illegal in order to not afflict non-smokers. But for my money, these kind of actions which are classified in “tie down” ones, are not quite wise and would not heal the smoking illness. For instance, imagine that you have banned smoking in your exclusive office and almost all of your employees smoke, by the act you took smoke, by the act you took you will keep safe others to not get addicted or literally have healthier workers, while the group that contain smokers, will include employees who are not punctual, concentrated at work. Therefore, I think some cultural acts to prevent people from smoking originally, is preferred.

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این نظر توسط amir nazem در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 11:50 دقیقه ارسال شده است

very good.شکلک

این نظر توسط ali momeni در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 21:01 دقیقه ارسال شده است

you use some new and beautiful word;lije tie down .but i think some of your sentences are long.and i think it is better to short them,
best wishes


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