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Ehsan بازدید : 57 یکشنبه 07 خرداد 1391 نظرات (2)

I can’t believe smokers and smoking at all. In addition to its bad effect on smokers’ health, it’s harmful for everyone near them. But the reality is this: we can’t force all smokers to release smoking !

Because of obvious bad effects of smoking on health, it’s necessary to making smoking illegal in public places. For example, I can’t bear someone smoking when I am near him and I don’t want to smell that disgusting smoke! Everyone have some rights in the society, and in my belief, it’s one of the clearest and most reasonable rights that someone have to keep his/her health safe and not being forced to breath in others cigarette smoke!

Finally, I want to say something. Try not to smoke not only in public places, but everywhere, every time and in any condition. It has no reasons except harms to your and others health.

 

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این نظر توسط amir nazem در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 19:53 دقیقه ارسال شده است

its better than to use :
dont like instead of cant bear
idea instead of beliefe

and you must say someone s smoking.
good luck شکلک

این نظر توسط ashkan bagheri در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 19:47 دقیقه ارسال شده است

you've made great sentences in order to explain the main idea and at the same time you made your audinces clear about your idea!!!
1- i think( personally) tolerate is better than believe
4-to making?????!!!!!! are you kidding?
12- you've forgotten also after but!!!! شکلک


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