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Ehsan بازدید : 71 چهارشنبه 03 خرداد 1391 نظرات (2)

All of us know that smoking is dangerous for our health; but our health is something personal. But that’s a question that why smoking is banned in public places. I want to mention some points to answer this question.

Many people think that a smoker person just hurts himself and never hurts non-smoker. But in fact passive smokers are the first injuries of smoking. Maybe people think that just smokers waste their lungs. But as matter of fact; passive smokers waste their lungs too. But there’s nothing to prove that passive smoking causes cancer.

It is funny to say that I know a person that he refuses to employ non-smokers! He believes that non-smokers always gang up and try to stop everyone else from smoking and they are so bossy. But I have to notice that he himself is smoker!

Finally; I think that smoking is a bad habit like another bad habits and society can’t tolerate bad habits.

 


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این نظر توسط amir nazem در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 18:45 دقیقه ارسال شده است

you mention the topic very good but in my idea you can mentiond some ways for preventing this problem and some ways for relinquish the cigarette.
good luck. شکلک

این نظر توسط ashkan bagheri در تاریخ 1348/10/11 و 23:59 دقیقه ارسال شده است

you have developed the gist really good and your examples were nice and tangible
2- its better to use so instead of but
6- passive smokers was great phrase
14- after "another" you should single noun but you have used plural one.
your conclusion was amazing


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